- Link user names into the Background Section
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Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Abstract
- Try avoid using third person (I,We,Our) etc..
- Only need to describe the problem and the approach to solving that problem. Do not include project details yet.
- Background
- Good
- Problem statement
- good
- Criteria
- Table looks good
- Literature Review
- Add some more references
- Construction
- Be sure to move the Design section as a subheading into the construction section
- Put captions onto each figure or photo. They need to be able to explain and stand alone in their description of the figure.
- Timeline
- Looks good in format, add some minor details to each deadline presented
- Costs
- Very Good, be sure that estimated costs for each component are accurate.
- Operation
- Mobile components need to have the caption below the figures and also be included into the construction section. For information about putting a caption onto a figure refer to appropedia help or my 215 project Zane Middle School RIPSAW
- Maintenance
- Schedule
- Instructions
- Conclusion
- Testing results
- include this section with some data
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
- add some steps to solving potential problems; links to external rainwater catchment systems
- Team
- Be sure to continue working hard, this was a good 1st draft. Finish up the remaining sections
- References
- Reference formatting looks good
Sorry I did not include this feedback before it was due. Add the troubleshooting and testing results sections and this page will be pretty good