Initial Feedback

Hi Team,

Nice start and good job including images. Some of your background should eventually move to a literature review section and be backed up with citations. Some of the background could be bolstered, e.g. referencing CCAT, Humboldt State University, your team, the semester, etc. Finally, the history of the greywater marsh before 2008 is not correct.

In addition, most of the design complications are due to the greywater effluent outlet from the house being so far below grade. There is a strong chance that you will need to do pumping to rectify that complication.

Thanks, --Lonny (talk) 15:50, 24 January 2017 (PST)

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