(some initial feedback)
 
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Revision as of 21:20, 18 May 2014

Here is some initial feedback:

  • I am fairly certain that http://www.appropedia.org/CCAT_Cold_Box is not the actual cold box that you were investigating. I think you should replace the CCAT Cold Box content with the correct description of the current cold box.
  • You could move your measured data into that page as well.
  • Please use the how to template for the maintenance section and use images with labels for clarity.
  • Be more clear with the language. For example: "Check annually hinges and door seals" for what?
  • Please utilize more peer editing.
  • Please adapt the plain text instruction that I included for you (the author) not the reader. E.g. "This is only how to troubleshoot basic operation. For complex issues, the solution might just say contact ________. It should be a table in this format:"
  • Fix up the formatting like I showed in the Sunfrost page.

--Lonny (talk) 11:59, 23 April 2014 (PDT)

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