- Be sure to use the format used when linking names: refer to background section
- In literature review add some writing to link ideas and evidence together, not just listing evidence in quotations
Feedback sections/template[edit source]
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Refer to format listed on this link Engineering 305/Project template and grading
- Abstract
- sentence structure needs improvement
- Background
- Good section just add that it was in the Spring 2015 semester
- Add some information about northern California and where Humboldt State is located
- Problem statement
- Criteria
- weighted criteria table should be in descending order of importance
- Look over the constraints for maintainability, ease of use, and educational value once more
- Literature Review
- Make sure to put this section before the timeline and after criteria
- Add some own discussion of information found instead of listing resources you have found
- Construction
- Include more detail in construction steps.
- Number steps
- Make sure to include this after literature review and before timeline
- Timeline
- Center timeline table on the screen
- Costs
- Be sure to include the total spent compared to the actual cost in table
- Operation
- Include link to MEOW page as well as brief table of steps explaining its operation
- Maintenance
- Include this section
- Schedule
- Not listed
- Instructions
- Include a table of instructions described on this link Engineering 305/Project template and grading
- Conclusion
- Grammar mistakes, look over
- Testing results
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
- Team
- References
- Looks good