Some initial feedback:
- As we discussed, I think you should make a page called CCAT greenhouse. Describe the greenhouse there as a project. Then make this the CCAT greenhouse/OM.
- "There is a concern of salt from the beach grass leeching into the clay and plaster of the wall, drying and cracking it." By whom?
- Any instruction regarding the sensor readings?
- Step 5 looks like troubleshooting.
- Show more images.
- Data logging as a future change?
- Replace CCAT project name with the correct name.