Feedback sections/template[edit source]
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Abstract
- Include a brief summary of what was done
- Background
- Good section
- proof read
- Problem statement
- avoid words like I, we, our etc..
- Criteria
- redo constraints
- dont include words like "More is better" etc..
- Literature Review
- organize subsections that discuss the materials used in project
- Add some figures and photos to relate to writing, be sure they have captions
- Construction
- add brief description of construction steps before diving into the timeline
- include a table that explains the construction steps taken, with some detail and figures
- Timeline
- The dates for the timeline should be listed in a weekly fashion
- Costs
- explain in detail how your cost for the project works out
- listed most expensive items first in descending order
- Operation
- This also needs a table with steps and figures explaining the operation of the final design
- Maintenance
- Section is good
- Schedule
- Instructions
- Conclusion
- Testing results
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
- Team
- References
- References used correctly and listed correctly, very good