Notes for Improvement[edit source]

General Notes[edit source]

Abstract[edit source]

  • Don't include information in the abstract that is not included in the rest of the page.
  • Update this when you finish your project

Background[edit source]

  • Mention when the project is taking place.

Problem Statement[edit source]

Criteria[edit source]

Literature Review[edit source]

  • Looks way better
  • Fix broken liks:

www.csuchico.edu/~jpgreene/itec144/m144_ch03.../m144_ch03-01.ppt

  • Fix reference #13

Construction[edit source]

Timeline[edit source]

  • Needs an introduction

Costs[edit source]

  • Good start. Keep updated as your project progresses.
  • Don't forget to include free/donated materials
  • We should check with Lonny, but I'm wondering about creating cost tables for each separate prototype? If so, they could be moved underneath each prototype section.

Design Renderings[edit source]

  • If you keep this section, I would explain more about what this thing was used for and include a picture

Completed Prototypes[edit source]

  • I really like this layout
  • I highly recommend changing your language from prescriptive to descriptive here. For example, instead of "how to" use "how we".

Maintenance[edit source]

  • Complete

Conclusions[edit source]

  • Complete
  • This section is important for your team! Don't neglect it!
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